Well, it's looking really great so far... And will be a really cool tattoo!

But anyway, down to business. If you think about her pose as a whole, and the message her body language is trying to give, then you might have to change a few (easy) things.

First off, I think you need to rotate her head towards her right shoulder. Then all you have to do is bring her right shoulder up towards her ear. The way I feel about her posture right now is that it's really uncomfortable, and her spine and shoulders are unnaturally straight.
What I'm getting is a message of mischievous innocence. She's very feminine for one thing.... The rose in her hair, the delicate jewelry.. Her lips are lightly parted, how her eyes are seductively glancing. Plus that ever so graceful hand unsheathing a bloody sword. That's my reasoning for the changes. I think if you play with the changes I mentioned, you'll get a greater overall effect, and a less static feel.

Let me know what you think

Now how's that for an effortless comment?

Hey, second attempt looks pretty good!
I bet it could look even sexier if you tilted the head a little more, too. It'd be more playful.

Or you could leave it as is, it's looking good

I really like the tattoo and the hairpiece. Really nice! Coming along great! ^^

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